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PostPosted: Fri 05 Oct 2012, 23:55 
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Name: Adanar “Cookie”
Age: 42
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Weapon of choice: Adanar likes to fight a mental battle with his opponent, but as this is not possible in a fight Adanar has a good control of his long cooking knife and throwing knifes.
Physical description: Adanar has a dark skin. his length 1.76 m, an average length. He is stronger than most man, even in the army, cause of his many years in the army and training every day. Even Though he trains a lot, Adanr still is somewhat “healthy” as he likes to call his body, that is a little round. Adanar’s hair is already light grey but that doesn’t mean he is getting weak. His face is scarred by life, carrying a cut through his lip and a striking one below his left eye, barely missing it. Adanar’s face is starting to show the signs of getting old, but not as bad as some people have. Adanar has dark brown eyes that match his personality, warm and full understanding.
Adanar likes to wear a simple dark green shirt with a comfortable leather armor as protection. Adanar wears normal pants and a ring he got from his “father”. The ring has the form of an eagle, symbolizing freedom.
Psychological profile: Adanar is one of the most experienced men in the army of Avaren. Being in lots of fights gave Adanar things to think about and formed his personality and his warmth to other humans. Adanar is a very kind man to humans as well as to animals. He is against violence and accepted the invitation to the army because his will to protect is even stronger than his aversion to violence. Adanar likes to talk and make jokes, though in fights he can be more serious. Also Adanar loves cooking and playing the lute whilst singing. Adanar has never felt anything for religion as Darien didn’t teach him anything about it and after the raid he didn’t feel like a god would solve his problems.

Pre-service record: How, when and where he was born, Adanar doesn’t know, what he does know is he grew up on the streets of Konigsberg, poor and without anyone to care for him. Adanar had to steal food and sleep on the street. Just another unknown boy at the streets of Konigsberg. But Adanar was different, he didn’t fight or go mad, instead he went to the little pieces of nature where he felt connected and just sat looking at the insects that landed on his hand.
One day, a cook from Yuroka saw Adanar sitting by tree and took him in as a son, teaching him to cook and to play the lute, giving him a future. Darien was more than just a teacher for Adanar, he was his father. When Adanar was 20 years old, Darien got killed while the village got raid by the Empires army. Adanar took the ring from Darien’s right hand and took off with just his lute, some food, his talent and his will to do good and protect life.
Adanar didn’t know where to go, he didn’t know anyone, and wandered around the land until he got to a little castle where he got a job as cook. He got into the army and trained hard, living life as it comes and making the most out of every day.
Method of recruiting: As a well-known cook in the army, Adanar was being watched by the borderguard. Adanar’s conviction for peace was one of the main reasons, as well as his great cooking skills and his happy attitude, to offer him a job in the borderguard. Adanar was working in the kitchen of the castle and as he walked back home he noticed a woman with her child, running away from a man who was following her. Adanar rushed to the woman and stood in front of her at the moment the man reached them. ‘Go away, they stole food worth what you cook in a day!’ the man yelled. ‘they must have their reasons for that’ Adanar said while he looked at the woman who fearfully nodded ‘I have eight kids to feed, I need the food’ ‘It doesn’t change a thing! Gimme my food back and let me punish you for stealing!’ The man pulled a gun and aimed at the woman. Adanar jumped between the woman and the man ‘give his food back, you can’t just steal’ he turned around to face the man ‘let them go, they will learn from this’ ‘someone has to pay for this’ ‘Then let me pay’ was the answer without hesitation. The man looked Adanar in his eyes ‘We would be glad to have you with us in the borderguard, Adanar’ stunned by the unexpected turnaround, Adanar just stared to the man. ‘I understand it is quite the shock, think about it boy’
Service record: Adanar has been serving in the borderguard for 19 years now, starting in the Northern guard for 3 years, stationed in Anstir’s Keep. The next 13 years, Adanar switched between teams in the Eastern guard and returned to the Northern guard to join the new-made specialist-team of castle Elaris where he has been the last 5 years. Adanar finds the team to be very pleasant as all the members are high level soldiers. Adanar thinks he isn’t perfectly suited for his place in the team because he can’t fight as good as the others, but he enjoys himself during the missions, keeping the moral high and feeding the hungry men. In castle Elaris, Adanar is known as “cookie” due to his cooking skills.
Relations with team members: Because Adanar is in this team since the start he knows all the members and likes all of them equally.


I changed the relations, his last name, physical description, special talent and added him learning to play the lute.

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I'm sorry, Rik. Mindreading and conjuring illusions are not possible with the magic system and alchemy we have. In that light, I can't approve of this PF. If you can find a talent that is more realistic and finish up the psychological profile (it ends in the middle of a sentence) that would improve your chance of acceptance greatly.

A minor note is about his looks. If he is 48, I think he should look older than you make him seem. If the first wrinkles just started to show up, he's looking damn young for his age.

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I don't agree with you here, Ulysses. I´m 44 years old and I don't have any rinkle whatsoever. So if he is 48 years of age and his wrinkles are just starting to show it is possible.


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I met a elderly woman a couple weeks ago in the shop where I work. When I estimated here age I tought she was around 65, turned she was 90+. So it is possible.
However, I think 48 is a little too old for being a member of a high-tier team.

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People in say the Medievals aren't becoming that old.. so yes maybe a slightly younger wouldn't be wrong..

Maybe you can make the powers of mindreading lesser? Like not frequent.. there are also people on earth who claim that they can read minds.. shouldn't have to do anything with magic?

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Or he says he can read minds but doesn´t really can. He only knows which thoughts cause which reactions (I don´t know this is a good English sentence :| ) I mean like the Mentalist, if you know that series.

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that isn't really on-topic anymore
I changed him to 42 years, this way he is experienced as viable as a soldier

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Yikes, forgot to approve of your PF, Duck. You already knew it, of course, but let's make it official here.

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Is my PF with the changes good too? I'd like to start writing, so I need your approval.

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You lack a special talent now, but I guess "experience" is a talent on its own. Approved!

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Uly do we have a word restriction? Such as minimum words is 100? because I have written a very small post :V

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I don't think that we need a minimum amount of words. That rule is to prevent players from solely spamming posts of extreme short length. And since I know we don't have that kind of players around, we don't need the rule. Sometimes you can't help but writing a short post.

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I just added something to my last post. So we can continue the rp.

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